VisualNEO Web landing page
Quote from luishp on May 10, 2020, 6:30 pmAlthough I enjoy much more development, I'm currently working on the marketing side and have done a VisualNEO Web landing page to promote it through social media advertisement. As my english is far from perfect I would like to ask you to review the texts and let me know if you find any error or something you think could be better.
VisualNEO Web Landing Page:
https://visualneoweb.visualneo.comThank you very much in advance!
Although I enjoy much more development, I'm currently working on the marketing side and have done a VisualNEO Web landing page to promote it through social media advertisement. As my english is far from perfect I would like to ask you to review the texts and let me know if you find any error or something you think could be better.
VisualNEO Web Landing Page:
https://visualneoweb.visualneo.com
Thank you very much in advance!
Quote from CN_Iceman on May 13, 2020, 11:08 amHi Luis.
I just saw the page and I really liked it.
As for whether the texts are well written ... everything seemed correct to me.
Buen trabajo! Os deseo lo mejor con este proyecto.
Hi Luis.
I just saw the page and I really liked it.
As for whether the texts are well written ... everything seemed correct to me.
Buen trabajo! Os deseo lo mejor con este proyecto.
Quote from ZeroSquidward on May 14, 2020, 6:22 amExcellent Luis. Kudos!
But there are some things I would like to point out from my own website design experience. Please note that I might be wrong in some aspects (I am not perfect).
- Consider including a live chat popup that welcomes conversations. The best live chat plugin would be tawk.to.
- Consider using accordions, sliders, revealing cards or 'read more' links on the explaining bits, app examples and also testimonials.
- I recommend using irregular shapes and/or patterns with relaxing gradient colors, mostly dark tones. I think eyes tend to get attracted on these aspects, thus enhancing focus and interest. Also include transitions like simple fade in effects on pictures and steps.
- I would recommend you limit the use of the word 'code'. The word 'code' to most people means 'THE HARD WAY'. Rather use the word 'action'.
- Summarize some titles and use catchy words. Also avoid repetition like the word 'drag and drop' and others.
On my spare time, I will develop a landing page prototype for you to see. I will send the link via e-mail.
Thank you.
Excellent Luis. Kudos!
But there are some things I would like to point out from my own website design experience. Please note that I might be wrong in some aspects (I am not perfect).
- Consider including a live chat popup that welcomes conversations. The best live chat plugin would be tawk.to.
- Consider using accordions, sliders, revealing cards or 'read more' links on the explaining bits, app examples and also testimonials.
- I recommend using irregular shapes and/or patterns with relaxing gradient colors, mostly dark tones. I think eyes tend to get attracted on these aspects, thus enhancing focus and interest. Also include transitions like simple fade in effects on pictures and steps.
- I would recommend you limit the use of the word 'code'. The word 'code' to most people means 'THE HARD WAY'. Rather use the word 'action'.
- Summarize some titles and use catchy words. Also avoid repetition like the word 'drag and drop' and others.
On my spare time, I will develop a landing page prototype for you to see. I will send the link via e-mail.
Thank you.
Quote from Ronnie on May 14, 2020, 11:40 amOverall, looks impressive. One feedback - some words (especially after the bold orange text) are missing, and some portions of text are ‘cropped’ off. This observation is seen on my iPad Mini...
Overall, looks impressive. One feedback - some words (especially after the bold orange text) are missing, and some portions of text are ‘cropped’ off. This observation is seen on my iPad Mini...
